Comments on: Can you give me feedback on my short story. http://design4kitchen.com/2010/08/23/can-you-give-me-feedback-on-my-short-story/ New design ideas for your kitchen Tue, 22 May 2012 16:49:57 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: Gray Box Smilie http://design4kitchen.com/2010/08/23/can-you-give-me-feedback-on-my-short-story/#comment-3736 Gray Box Smilie Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000 http://answers.yahoo.com/question/?qid=20100821161226AAF1YC6#comment-3736 That’s really good, but I think the story would be better with out the last segment, “Doreen:” Want to submit it to my site, http://wugallery.webnode.com . I would love to your story in my gallery. That’s really good, but I think the story would be better with out the last segment, “Doreen:”

Want to submit it to my site, http://wugallery.webnode.com . I would love to your story in my gallery.

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